http://armago.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] armago.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] alexey_donskoy 2015-12-25 08:42 am (UTC)

Неплохо, идея нравится. Но конструкция "посреди задней комнаты." немного громоздкая, потому что никакой "передней" комнаты не было указано. Маловато описаний и поэтому картина не четкая.
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